Even when you correct my English, please do as succinct as possible.
「日常でよくある行動や言動を簡単な短い英語にしたので修正してもらいたいです。」
を訳すと↓のようになります：
"I have described frequently taken actions and words from our every day lives into short English phrases. I would appreciate it if you could correct them."
アメリカ合衆国 
