The place I would like to live the most is Hawaii, then Paris, and then Rome.
My favorite place to live would be Hawaii, second would be Paris, and thirdly Rome.
1) The place I would like to live the most is Hawaii, then Paris, and then Rome.
「一番住みたい場所はハワイで、次がパリ、そしてローマです。」
then を使って言うことができます。
2) My favorite place to live would be Hawaii, second would be Paris, and thirdly Rome.
「住むのに大好きな場所はハワイ、２番目はパリ、３番目はローマです。」
second, thirdly を使っても言えます。
ご参考になれば幸いです！
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