I made some sentences with some new words I learned the day before yesterday.
Can you please correct any mistakes I made in the beginning of our class?
この場合、次のような言い方ができますよ。
ーI made some sentences with some new words I learned the day before yesterday.
「おととい習った新しい単語でいくつか文章を作りました」
ーCan you please correct any mistakes I made in the beginning of our class?
「授業の初めに添削してもらえませんか?」
ご参考まで!