Your sentences are as though they were written in bullet points, don't you think?
ご質問ありがとうございます。
この場合は*look*を使うのが良いと思います。
上の文章は*be*動詞を使いましたが、その代わりに*look*を使うこともできます。
"Your sentences are as though they were written in bullet points,"＝「君の文章はまるで箇条書きのようだ」
"don't you think?"＝「そう思わない？」
ご参考までに。
アメリカ合衆国 
