"The cigarettes in the smoking scene in the Japanese version have been removed in the English version."
"the cigarettes in the smoking scene in the Japanese version" 「日本語版の喫煙シーンのタバコ」
"the cigarettes" 「タバコ」
"the smoking scene" 「喫煙シーン」
"the Japanese version" 「日本語版」
"have been removed" 「がなくなっています」
"the English version" 「英語版」
In the Japanese version, there’s a smoking scene, but in the English version the cigarette has been removed.
In the Japanese version, there’s a smoking scene, but in the English version the cigarette has been removed.
The Japanese version includes a cigarette, but the English version edits it out.
In the English version, the cigarette is missing from the smoking scene that appears in the Japanese version.
has been removed(取り除かれた)
is edited out(編集でカットされている)
is missing(見当たらない/欠けている)
が使いやすいです。