I like people who work hard at something and shine bright as a result.
I really respect people who put their heart and soul into something and their life gleams because of it.
この場合、次のような言い方ができますよ。
ーI like people who work hard at something and shine bright as a result.
「何かに一生懸命な人は輝いていて好きです」
shine bright「明るく輝く」
ーI really respect people who put their heart and soul into something and their life gleams because of it.
「何かに身も心も捧げる人は輝いていてすごく尊敬する」
to put one's heart and soul で「身も心も捧げる・〜に打ち込む」
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