Could you please tell me about any mistakes I made today or anything else that stands out to you?
Do you mind telling me if I said anything wrong or made any obvious mistakes today?
ーCould you please tell me about any mistakes I made today or anything else that stands out to you?
「今日間違えたところや何かきになることを教えてもらえますか？
any mistakes I made 「私が間違えたところ」
anything else that stands out to you「その他あなたが気になったところ」
ーDo you mind telling me if I said anything wrong or made any obvious mistakes today?
「もし何か間違ったことを言ったり、明らかな間違いがあったら教えてもらってもいいですか？」
say anything wrong で「何か誤ったことを言う」
make any obvious mistakes で「明らかな間違いをする」
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カナダ 
