Most people who have jobs take their kids to preschool.
ーPeople who work put their kids in daycare.
「働く人たちは子供を保育園に預ける」
people who work で「働く人たち」
parents who work で「働く親」
put ... in daycare で「…を保育園に入れる」
ーMost people who have jobs take their kids to preschool.
「働くほとんどの人は子供を保育園に預ける」
people who have jobs で「仕事をしている人たち」
to take ... to preschool で「…を保育園に連れていく」
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