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私が図書館に着いたとき彼女は5時間も勉強していた、を英訳すると「私が着いたとき」＝過去、「彼女が5時間勉強していた」＝大過去。さらに「勉強していた」は過去進行形と考えて、
She had been studying for 5 hours when I had arrived in library.
間違っているのでしょうか？
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私が図書館に着いたとき彼女は5時間も勉強していた
She had been studying for 5 hours when I had arrived in library.
She had been studying for 5 hours when I had arrived は大丈夫です。
in library -> at the library か I arrived at the library
I had arrived at the library or I arrived at the library
arrived at the library のほうが natural だと思います。
She had been studying for 5 hours when I arrived at the library.
さらに when -> by the time
She had been studying for 5 hours by the time I arrived at the library.
By the time I arrived at the library, she had been studying for 5 hours.
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