"When I was in the lower ranks at my company I was always concerned about what my superiors thought of me."
- "When I was in the lower ranks at my company I was always concerned about what my superiors thought of me."
"When ~" 「〜の頃」
"I was in the lower ranks at my company" 「入社したて」
"lower ranks" 「したて」
"I was always concerned about ~" 「〜気になっていた」"always" 付けなくても大丈夫です。
"what my superiors thought of me" 「上司からどう見られているか」"How my superiors saw me" も言えます。